Thursday, 23 May 2019

- My Moment in Time -


1 comment:

  1. Hi Monica,

    Kayla here, from St Patrick's school Greymouth.
    I really liked this piece of writing! I think you did a great job!!
    This definitely reminds me of being on a beach!!

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